Rae
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Post by Rae on Jul 31, 2012 22:21:16 GMT -5
Name: Edwin Mallay Age: Unsure--believed to be at the least thirteen. Occupation: Street Rat/Orphan. Manifestation: Manifestation of Throat--Voice Box. Personality: Quiet, reserved--refuses to talk due to fear his manifestation will expend out of his control. Solemn with rare smiles to those he is close to and cares for. Skills: Communication with animals--particularly birds--due to his manifestation. Lithe and nimble, giving him speed and the ability to dodge into small allies and other such jams. Good at scouting and blending for information because he's so quiet. Equipment: Scarf--helps him scale walls and stay in precarious situations for long periods of time. Background: Abandoned in the city by his father after incidences with his mother in relation to his manifestation, Edwin has learned to fend for himself. Thusly, he's become very withdrawn and has trust issues with older figures. He currently resides in the sewers of the cities with his raven companion, Enya. He eats rarely because he hates the sensation of stealing from others--as such, most of what he does steal comes from dumpsters outside bakeries and restaurants. Appearance: Lithe, thin, 4'9". Dark black hair with emerald green eyes--sunken cheeks with a gap between his front teeth. Ears stick out from under his hat. Blood type O+.
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nocturne
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See Alvin. See Alvin Run. Run, Alvin, RUN!!!!
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Post by nocturne on Jul 31, 2012 23:38:56 GMT -5
Hey!
A little sparse, but I like the basic structure. There are some hooks in his writeup that you can hang some stuff on. For instance:
So who does he scout for? Does he earn money from people in the Quarantine District just listening in? Is he an informant? Does he have connections to Internal Security? How about criminal groups? Or even political groups within the New Lancaster hierarchy? Young street boys have open ears, and nobody really pays too much attention to them...
Ask yourself how you would describe him if he were a friend of yours you wanted us to meet. Describe what you like about him, what you don't like, and what we can expect when we meet him!
All said, though, I like the basic idea. If/when he gets approved, I would love to introduce him in the Daily Grind arc as one of our case files to meet and hook up with.
-nocturne.
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